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I enjoyed reading about your first day at HOME school. I liked the pictures you added as backgrounds and the descriptive language you used. Do you think some of the backgrounds made it easy to read all the words? Next time could you re-read your writing to check for correct punctuation and spelling. :)
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I enjoyed reading about your first day at HOME school. I liked the pictures you added as backgrounds and the descriptive language you used. Do you think some of the backgrounds made it easy to read all the words?
ReplyDeleteNext time could you re-read your writing to check for correct punctuation and spelling. :)